Let’s All Yell “Important!”
HOW MANY MAILINGS, how many e-mails have come to you lately, stained with the sweat of desperation?
When the brain shrivels, when imagination shrinks, when creativity flies out of the idea-nest leaving it empty, or — may the Lord help our benighted profession — when a dilettante or an amateur is let loose at the keyboard, logic gives way to panic.
The result: The word “Important” (usually followed by at least one exclamation point) grunts and heaves, its perpetrator hoping whoever sees the message won’t recognize it as a muscleless shuffle of uninspired desperation.
Only after the annoyance of opening two phony “Important” mailings on the same day did I decide to plead with the noteworthy readers of this publication to please, please not join the rank ranks of not worthy marketers who have driven “Important” from the field of dreams.
So can we make this covenant? For the next two mailings, the next two e-mails, the next two space ads and the next two broadcast commercials over which you have any control, suppress the mindless urge to slap on an “Important!” label. Just two. That’ll help you kick the habit.
A sampler of what is setting off this tirade:
Here’s an envelope: “IMPORTANT DOCUMENTS ENCLOSED.” OK, how important? Wow, a Capital One Visa card with 0% “intro” APR. Of course, the importance is dulled a bit because although I’m “pre-selected”… and this is an “invitation,” although an enclosure “invites” me to apply (ugh!) online…they ask for a ton of personal information and somehow forget to tell me when the “intro” period ends and the APR goes up to 19.8%.
Watching bananas change color is more important than that.
Another envelope says, “Please open immediately.” Through the glassine window, on a fake-check background, all caps: “IMPORTANT INFORMATION ENCLOSED.” Let’s see how important it is.
Oh, I can’t contain my excitement! “FREE MINUTES are just the beginning of AT&T’s investment in your satisfaction.” Nope. They’re not the beginning. They’re the end, not only because of this tortured syntax and because the letter begins, “True satisfaction is about the people in your life.” It’s because, of all the choices this creative team (a euphemism) had to generate response, it settled for the tired old “Important” scam — a lie.
Speaking of “IMPORTANT INFORMATION ENCLOSED,” my broker sent me a letter with those words on the envelope. What’s inside? An AT&T newsletter to shareholders. At least the other two had a first class presort imprint. This “important” trivia is standard bulk stuff. Sigh.
Hmmm, what’s with AT&T? Here’s a two-color custom-converted 6-inch-by-9-inch envelope with “IMPORTANT NEWS THAT’S BEEN PREPARED ESPECIALLY FOR YOU.” What’s the important news? An invitation to visit the Web site, suggestions for safety while using my AT&T cell phone, and the boast, “We’re Making a Difference in Your Community.”
Three suggestions, AT&T and anyone else who subscribes to this thoughtless ploy: 1) If you want to suggest importance, don’t overproduce the envelope; 2) use a bulk mail stamp, not bulk mail indicia; 3) for clichés such as “We’re making a difference in your community,” don’t use initial caps. Oh, a fourth suggestion: Since both you and I know the truth about this mailing, why not substitute “Useful” for “Important”?
Here’s a giant envelope, bigger than a No. 11, from AARP. Brilliant envelope copy: “IMPORTANT INFORMATION ENCLOSED.” I wonder who was clever enough to think that one up. They sent me two of these, which suggests it might be important to clean up their list.
What’s important? A suggested switch to AARP auto insurance. What’s funny is the statement that Florida drivers over age 50 are good drivers and deserve lower rates. Come on, fellows, have you ever driven behind (or worse, alongside) some of those superannuated reflexless drivers down here? And anyway, if I want to read something important I’ll look in the obituary column for today’s list of safe senior drivers.
Moving up in size to a 9-inch-by-12-inch Kraft jumbo envelope, here’s an “IMPORTANT COMPLIANCE QUESTIONNAIRE” from HRdirect. The questionnaire is the voice of doom, with “Federal regulations mandate that you…,” “The law also requires that you…” and “Your state may require that…” The “questions” all ask whether I’m “in compliance.” Clever stuff. But is the questionnaire important? I’d have opened the valves of the mighty Wurlitzer on this one, with copy such as “You can be operating illegally…and not even know it,” plus a rubber stamp with just two words: “Questionnaire enclosed.” Why? Because as professional as this mailing is, “Important” and “Questionnaire” are out of sync with each other.
Oh, they’re all over the place. I have an “Important Message Inside” from RetailTech (sorry, it isn’t important), an “IMPORTANT NOTICE. DO NOT DISCARD” from PC Week (sorry, it isn’t important), and “IMPORTANT AUDIT MATERIAL” from Mobile Computing & Communications (do I get that magazine?). None of these has the wallop of my favorite, a space ad with a huge “IMPORTANT NOTICE” reversed across the top. The subhead: “Beware of Bargain Air Duct Cleaners.”
I promise to beware, not only of bargain air duct cleaners but of all those horses’ necks out there who think self-importance substitutes for the genuine article. And that’s as important a statement as I can make today.
HERSCHELL GORDON LEWIS is the principal of Lewis Enterprises in Fort Lauderdale, FL. He consults with and writes direct response copy for clients worldwide. Among his 24 books is a new edition of “On the Art of Writing Copy.”